Treasured (the remake)

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Posted on 15th September 2011 by baru in blogging |WOW poems |writing

I write this that it may be read
that it may be read and taught
that it be taught and understood
Understood and done
done and remembered
Remembered and treasured
Treasured forever

I tell this that it may be heard
that it may be heard and known
that it is known and told
that it is told and retold
Retold and remembered
Remembered and treasured
Treasured forever

I sleep that I may dream
dream so that I will
I Will that it comes to be
it becomes and it grows
it grows that it is remembered
Remembered and treasured
Treasured forever

I share this that you may have
That you may have and not lose
That you may not lose but hold
That you hold and protect
Protect and remember
Remember and treasure
Treasure forever

I am for you are

You are that I may be

I be that I live

Live that I write

Write and remembered

Remembered forever

© Baru 2011

a re-write of  THIS poem

5 Comments

  1. Thursday Poets Rally says:

    charming sentiments, well penned.

    :)

    15th September 2011 at 4:37 AM

  2. Blogging is just Writing – Fabulous on the Blog « Storymoja says:

    [...] Treasure – A Poem: I found this poem just perchance. I was looking for something that would help me explain the memory of a brother I lost ten years ago next month. And I found Treasured by Baru. [...]

    15th September 2011 at 1:41 PM

  3. Blogging is just Writing – Fabulous on the Storymoja Blog :: Storymoja says:

    [...] Treasure – A Poem: I found this poem just perchance. I was looking for something that would help me explain the memory of a brother I lost ten years ago next month. And I found Treasured by Baru. [...]

    15th September 2011 at 1:47 PM

  4. JnttNemo says:

    Read it, then read it again, then read it aloud because it rolls off the tongue so beautifully.

    15th September 2011 at 2:44 PM

  5. baru says:

    Thank you for reading me…

    15th September 2011 at 5:13 PM

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